that was awesome.
your just getting better and better
Wow you have come a long way from freshman year. Great job!
as always, nice work!
(O,O) omg, wow. just like that!!!
Pretty, but to fast
Everything goes by far to fast. There is a rule in animation, for every letter there is on screen you need to to add a second onto the amount of time that word is shown on screen. I understand you were animating to music, but i would advise to maybe get a longer cut of music so the viewer can understand what is going on. Nice work though.
That is actually a very good rule. I tried my best to keep the words on as long as possible, but I was limited to 30 seconds in the class this was made for, though today I discovered my professor didn't really care and it was due today. I am planning on working with my brother to get a longer cut, and reworking this animation to be slower and less hectic for my portfolio.
Your message is clear. and yeah... myspace does blow hard. The drawings are nice but there is no real animation.
I do this it was a little choppy, HOWEVER, you are one person and you can animate at any frame rate you damn well please and i respect that. Overall the character designs are excellent. You definitely have a great handle on how to layout a scene. Great job!
The writing was really the best part of this. Great job!
Talk to the hand old man
So, i just wanna say that i'm a girl gamer, and you may think that i'm not good at games cause i'm a girl... lol. very nice Max.
Don't worry buddy, I know you're good at video games
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